Gozon — I will politely kill you!: TALK — Friday, 24 May 2013
Well, it's kind of hard to judge considering one of them is my own, so yeah. I wish your story had better grammar, though I can live with it. It was an interesting perspective and plot against my own story, where you had Future #16 come in and had Trunks remain the main warrior, not bringing back any of the other warriors. I like how you had Trunks go Super Saiyan 3, I plan for him to go Super Saiyan 3 in my own story. I wish there was a little more explanation to the arrival of Bojack and Majin Buu, but otherwise I like your story.